Axel Marconi (DONE!)

[Axel Marconi]

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[li] Smart
[/li][li] Easily Startled
[/li][li] Very Ticklish
[/li][li] Strong Willed
[/li][li] Protective
[/li][li] Secretive
[/li][li] Constantly Meditating
[/li][li] Easily Humored
[/li][li] Cautious
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[/u][/b]
[li] Easily Humored
[/li][li] Cautious
[/li][li] Smart
[/li][li] Strong Willed
[/li][li] Easily Startled
[/li][li] Very Ticklish
[/li][li] Protective
[/li][li] Brotherly
[/li][li] Loving/Caring
[/li][li] Hard Headed
[/li][li] Bacon Lover
[/li][li] Kick-Box Lover
[/li][li] Honest
[/li][li] Devoted
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Pshhh! Who needs words when I've got pics.
Note his eyes are hazel and not green. I had forgotten to change eye color on him. His eyes are very flexible in changing colors depending on what colors he wears. He carries no distinct features other then his eyes. The intense colors they can become leaves people in awe.

The markings on his body become visible when he releases his aura, the color of them can change from Indigo, Yellow, or Red, depending on which type of aura he is using. The cape is made out of unique material that can shield ones aura color, allowing him be more stealthy.

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Axel had been orphaned at the age of two and had been placed into government care in there latest project called the G.L.H.. The project was meant to give the government their own league of heroes with powers based upon a wide selection of information on heroes they had gathered(along with some DNA). Instead of giving these abilities to an inorganic being, they thought they might use a select few of humans. By placing all the orphans they had taken in, the government put them under strenuous mental and physical training. From the data they collected from that, they categorized each of the children under specific groups. Axel was placed under 'Natural Gift' given his ability to channel the basics of it quite well for his age.
Upon the final day of their preparations to take on their powers, there were only twelve out of one-hundred kids in total that had made it thus far. They twelve had been strange injections to hopefully give the government their loyal little heroes. Several had been able to awaken their powers, and the others, were put down upon failure.
At the age of seven, Axel, along with the others, had begun to go under more training to teach them common services they must do, along with conditioning and special skills. Axels power's had potential, but he was the weakest in the group. Only able to create aura constructions and weak energy orbs, he went into combat training learn Aikido and Kick-Boxing.
The one he became most fond of was kick-boxing. He was also trained in stealth and to use hacking devices. He was the side-line hero in the group. Never out to fight, and didn't start helping till he was 11.
The times when was actually needed were the happiest days of his young life. The mission they were sent on was a pure stealth mission. Meaning Axel finally got to lead and show what he was made of, but it was all for naught. The Unit had been found out and were being overrun. The infamous villain had made an appearance and attempted to electrocute the head of the team, Offense. Out of his natural instinct to protect, Axel jumped push Offense out of the way and took the bolt head on. He had been hit in the center of abdomen, where a chip ,that had been placed in his skin to control some of his actions, short circuited. His overall memory was fried and comprehension for the things going on around him left him frightened. Unable to use his powers, he simply fled from the diminishing base. Leaving his forgotten team in the hands of the enemy.

When the government had found out what had happened. They were planning on just eliminating the boy, but instead decided on letting him live to join the ranks with the other heroes and gather information on them. However, they couldn't trust that he'd comprehend or even agree to help, so they took advantage of his anastasia and created an android to take the place of his 'Uncle' who had been searching for him. When the android first met him, he told Axel of how his parents were also skilled in using aura manipulation and that they were in a small team, and that the death of his parents were caused by his lack of skill. Upon hearing this news, his only thoughts were to become stronger in using arua, and expanding his knowledge of it.

Upon becoming skillful in one of the seven aura manipulations, Axel feels he can now help and protect others. Since the current stature of the world, he feels obligated to join and help the other heroes, meaning his next goal is to join The Team.
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• Kick Boxing:
  
  Level: Delta
  Description: Despite his memory-loss, he still remembers how to kick-box. He never uses his hands, except for when defending. His legs are where all the power lies. Able to perform a wide variety of kicking abilities, and some knee and elbow strikes. But he has changed some movements when he kick-boxes allowing him to do more acrobatic movement and be more ductile and strike faster and harder.
  
  
• Stealth Prodigy:
  
  Level: Delta
  Description: Another skill he had been trained in that he luckily remembers. His skill in stealth is far from being on the same level as Batman or Nightwing. Even Robin still remains above him. Despite it, the government had trained him to have the ability to sneak in and out areas undetected.
  
  
• Aura Manipulation
  Level Gamma
  
  Manipura(Yellow)
  Level: Gamma
  Description: Deals with generating energy from one's aura and will-power.
  Aura Constructions: He can turn his aura into yellow, 3-dimensional shapes like cubes and rectangles, which can be referred to as barriers. Their creation is activated by simple body movements(The bigger/stronger they are, the more movement and energy it would take to create one). He can also extend their height, length, and width by moving in a way that resembles kick-boxing. Though any basic fighting movements can trigger the shapes to move. He is still able to create is arced shields which he can create with a simple thought, unlike the shapes, and can throw them.
  Energy Ball Projection: Axel is able to use his aura to creat orbs of energy that he can throw. The largest he can create is .5 meters in diameter. The can create smaller orbs for rapid fire. The amount of power put in it can take more time and energy to create the orb.
  

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Secrets
Some secrets he holds are unknown to him, but certain flashes of colors and names may trigger them which could possibly leave him open. He has developed a crush on just about all well known heroes and sidekicks. He has a bacon stash in his room.
Weakness
Aura may fall victim to anger or hatred empowerment. He's scared off all types of bugs and can be easily startled or scared by the simplist of unsuspected noises.
Limitations: If connections are blocked, aura cannot flow. Axel must be in control of his mood. Rest is required to stabilize the mind to regenerate energy. If too much is used, he can pass out.
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He wears a necklace his 'Uncle' has recently given. The chain is silver and hold a simple cross. Cell phone. [/style][STYLE=color: #191919; font-size: 12px; margin-top: 10px; margin-bottom: 10px; text-align: center; font-family: courier new]Application was created by Ninjan8an105[/style][/td][td][atrb=border,0,true][atrb=cellpadding,0,true][atrb=valign,top][atrb=cellspacing,0,true][atrb=style, width: 40px;][STYLE=background-color: #f1e3b4; font-family: courier new; font-size: 30px; color: #404040; min-height: 150px; padding: 5px; text-align: center; moz-border-radius: 0px 10px 10px 0px; -o-border-radius: 0px 10px 10px 0px; border-radius: 0px 10px 10px 0px; -webkit-border-radius: 0px 10px 10px 0px;]A u r a[/style][/td][/tr][/table]
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[Fong]

Fong here~

First of all, nice drawings. It's fun to see people make their own heroes on paper~

Now, a few things before I give my approval:

Your alias on the side of your app has to be the same as the alias you give; in your case, it needs to be Defense or Jitterbug.

No Lantern Corps powers if you're not a lantern. Not even something that is similar to it. It's somewhere on the banned list. Note that there are only two lantern corpses at the moment as well.
Thus, if you wish light constructs, find another reason to have it. Edit your history and weaknesses and powers accordingly to that.

Does your character have personal secrets, that are not related to his memory loss? Like, him being secretly scared of bunnies for example? Or that he is actually a secret villain? /random suggestions thrown in here.

Lastly, at the bottom, please put your chat name and not the name of your character. Thank you.

[Axel Marconi]

The changes have been made, and I must say, I prefer these powers soo much more. If one of the auras needs to be ridden of, or maybe stleath in place for the aura, I can easily do that if needed to

[Fong]

Me again~

With comments, sadly, again.

First of all your nickname - make it that it doesn't look so weird on the side of the application. Put a space between each letter and it should be fine I think.


A few issues with your history still. Minor, but still bothersome.

Only able to create aura constructions and weak energy orbs, he went into combat training where he learned Krav Manga, Wing Tsun, Aikido, Kick-Boxing, and JHR.

• What is JHR? Write it all out please.
  
• At such young age, a child's body cannot do that much training, even if it's a meta human. It'd grow deformed if it went under too much pressure. And since your super power ain't a super adaptable body or one that is "made" for combat, reduce the amount of martial arts and limit it to one or two. Preferably to kick-boxing and some similar martial arts - not one that is of a complete different branch. Honestly, I'd say Krav Maga (you spelled it wrong following what wikipedia told me) or even simply Muay Thai, since it has it's resemblances to kick-boxing.
  

Still some issues with your powers:

Reduce Kick-boxing or your aura to a level lower. Only one Gamma power, except if you substitute properly.
Secondly - only three powers for the good guys to start with. So you got to make a choice.
Take the link out in the bottom of the powers part.

As for your necklace...is it this 'uncle' who does it? Also, you cannot hack into Batman's stuff. Or that of the League. Or that of any super technology nerd really. And if you do and do get valuable info out of it, you first need to ask permission for it. Same for recording info and watching through it. If it's insignificant, like your girlfriend talking about her latest newest skirt, it's fine I suppose /shot
Also, mystical charming? As in, someone magical did something to it? No-no. Won't do. Considering your character has no connections at all to magical beings in it's history or background, it won't do.

[Axel Marconi]

le' done

[Luchie♐]

Some more minor issues.
1. You have six powers listed. However heros can only possess three of them to start, unless you are making a canon in which case the rules are modified. So I`m going to ask you to drop the extra three.
Other than that you should be good.

[Axel Marconi]

Done, I think.